Turtleman95

Yeah. I know I have a fairly large amount of issues that I'm trying to fix. Pretty new to writing and have trouble with dialogue between people in general. Thanks for the review and suggestion!

as of right now i am unsure but there is a M rating just in case. in the future i have plans for naru to befriend more of the rookie 9 so it's a definite possibility

is this an original fic?

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

my thoughts exactly

thank you for the chapter

I figure in a big village like Konoha, it wouldn't be hard to find certain items in the trash or on the street. imagine how often people lose things, especially lighters and how common torches were in Naruto, especially in a place like a secret hide out. so to answer your question, yes just like that.

Of course as the author of the book, I'm giving myself 5 stars. That being said, I am a newbie writer so expect mitsakes. see what I did there? There should be few grammatical errors, I Am Not using chatgpt to write this, just my good ol thumbs. if you feel obliged, drop some power stones, if not cool beans man.

Another great chapter. Thanks!