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Will the MC be willing to give anything is required to achieve his own goals? Including, for example, killing people 'he cares for', or something along those lines? If he's going to not be like a villain or be evil, then it's not my cup of tea. I'd like to see a MC that treats everything and everyone as his assets only... I wonder if this novel is like that?
Hope this novel won't contain any kind of romance, harem or caring for others MC, as that would make him more restricted. If he just focus on himself and does not care about anyone and is willing to do anything for power, then that'd be wonderful and it would make more sense as he haves a system lol
A friendly reminder. You should watch out for some paragraphs that contain capital letters when they shouldn't have them. You do a lot that precisely, you could abstain more or just use a few tools to smoothen your writing, and also you repeat a lot of words, just an observation. Thanks for the chapters, hope there is more stability on the updates...
So there is going to be romance? Or worse, harem? If that is the case, I'm afraid I will have to abandon this book, although it is surprisingly good in both writing and narrative, with other categories yet to give a rough classification due to the lack of content
I like how things are going, and yes, I noticed some things about Shi since you made the Namuh Village... 'arc', if I can give it a name. However, I don't like Shi and the whole Namuh Village situation in the least bit. But that's just my thoughts on it, I prefer Yaan being ruthless and completely devoid of care, love or anything else to others. I like him being this version, truly a character that would do anything to achieve its goals, even sacrificing his everything to it.