I recommend you to polish more your writing. The paragraphs are too long, some sentences don't make any sense between third POV and first POV, and also some sentences need corrections. Just saying, cause this first chapter looks really hectic.

I like how this is going for now. Keep going. Also, thanks for the chapter.

Yeah, sure. Hope you get well soon enough then

Thanks for the chapter. Hope this MC will be focused on himself only, caring only about how much benefits he could get instead of amy romance or caring for others. Good beginning btw.

Will the MC be willing to give anything is required to achieve his own goals? Including, for example, killing people 'he cares for', or something along those lines? If he's going to not be like a villain or be evil, then it's not my cup of tea. I'd like to see a MC that treats everything and everyone as his assets only... I wonder if this novel is like that?

No spoilers.

Of course its Li Shenxian.

Work, accountant.

Unknown, at least four chapter a week

I will. Thanks again, and if you see any wrong words in any paragraph, do make a comment in it so I can fix it, as I am writing on the phone at the moment (because of me being at work lol)

Thank you for the kind words. I will do my best, tho the chapter's length left me with bitterness

Hope this novel won't contain any kind of romance, harem or caring for others MC, as that would make him more restricted. If he just focus on himself and does not care about anyone and is willing to do anything for power, then that'd be wonderful and it would make more sense as he haves a system lol

Privilege chapters? It's a shame, and so early too. If I were you I'd wait until you at least have more content. It was a good read, farewell, wish you sucess

Will this novel contain a MC that cares / loves others instead of a ruthless one that only cares for himself and power? If yes, please tell me so I don't have to waste my time.

I know, but is it really needed? Can't Tian Yongheng be ruthless and indifferent towards the others? He won't gain anything by loving or caring for anyone...

Also, why romance?!?

A friendly reminder. You should watch out for some paragraphs that contain capital letters when they shouldn't have them. You do a lot that precisely, you could abstain more or just use a few tools to smoothen your writing, and also you repeat a lot of words, just an observation. Thanks for the chapters, hope there is more stability on the updates...

I like this chapters for the things you showed, but if this is going to be some kind of romance / caring for her (speaking of Yaan to Zue Yin), then... Well, I wouldn't like that, to say the least. And I would be too disappointed to

So there is going to be romance? Or worse, harem? If that is the case, I'm afraid I will have to abandon this book, although it is surprisingly good in both writing and narrative, with other categories yet to give a rough classification due to the lack of content

It is indeed pretty interesting, I wonder what awaits ahead. Please, upload more chapters!