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Right completely forgot about that lol. My bad.

Typo. Above it says third will earn only 250 points.

The fact he's attached himself to the Clan even though he knows all the shit that's going to happen, or even when thinking about the literal infinite possibilities he has is dumb enough.

This is completely out of blue to be honest. He's had no reason to feel like that. For the love of God, he was an adult and he was accustomed to the dark of the world before crossing. He should be thinking of how to survive himself and not care about what others want of him, the ninja world isn't for the soft-hearted. I can already think more than a hundred and twelve ways he could be so much better than he is right now, because of their parents and overall bullshitting. My god

I am reading, so keep it up. It is decent for now, but I hope this doesn't contains a soft-hearted man or has him helping others out of nowhere... the same goes for romance of any kind. If this book ks going to contain any of these things for the MC then I'll be dropping. So if you could go straight to the point...

I recommend you to polish more your writing. The paragraphs are too long, some sentences don't make any sense between third POV and first POV, and also some sentences need corrections. Just saying, cause this first chapter looks really hectic.

I like how this is going for now. Keep going. Also, thanks for the chapter.

Yeah, sure. Hope you get well soon enough then

Thanks for the chapter. Hope this MC will be focused on himself only, caring only about how much benefits he could get instead of amy romance or caring for others. Good beginning btw.

Will the MC be willing to give anything is required to achieve his own goals? Including, for example, killing people 'he cares for', or something along those lines? If he's going to not be like a villain or be evil, then it's not my cup of tea. I'd like to see a MC that treats everything and everyone as his assets only... I wonder if this novel is like that?