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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak11mth
    Replied to PrideAndLust

    As such, I didn't see romance here (if you're talking about romances with the main character) There were only hints, but maybe there is already romance. I quit reading this fan fiction when the protagonist became the head of the village

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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Replied to feitan_lax

    Of the most important characters, he killed Orochimara, Danzo, and Sarutobi. All. They are already being killed in almost every fan fiction. This is not unusual.

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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Commented

    Author, decide on the character of the hero. He is a murderer who kills ordinary residents who did not harm his comrades or a stupid idiot who is not able to kill Sakumo, who did not help him, but kills his allies in droves. Decide already

    Ch 193 Chapter 192 Another Day, Another Death
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Replied to Shape_Matters

    You're so "smart." He snatched me with one picture. The hero of this story is a dumb patient, how do canon characters differ from supporting characters? Nothing, but the protagonist does not kill them, although they killed a bunch of his people. He's just a coward.

    Ch 191 Chapter 190 A Death
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Commented

    I have a bunch of questions. What was the point of putting him in a non-Konoha if he hardly kills canon characters? The author is just a coward who is afraid of incomprehensible things.

    Ch 191 Chapter 190 A Death
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Commented

    Commentary not on this chapter, but on the work as a whole. Why is Jirai's character so different in different fanfics? Here I personally want to dismember him and feed him his own organs. The most annoying character

    Ch 185 Chapter 184 Slaughter
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Commented

    Even I can last 50 seconds without oxygen. And the monsters of that world can't? Some kind of nonsense

    Ch 9 Ch 09 - The Beginning
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    One Piece: The Slowest Man
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Commented

    I'd like to see this as a separate job (or a job where the protagonist gets the power of Law).

    Ch -1 Boruto 3
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    Naruto: Aokiji Yuki
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak1yr
    Commented

    How an alcoholic's T-shirt turned into a T-shirt without an arm? Я требую объяснений

    Ch 11 A wild Zuko appears - E
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    Journey Home – Multiverse, starting at the Avatar TLA
    Anime & Comics · Simple_Russian_Boi
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak2yr
    Posted

    I have not yet seen the two universes on the table. How can you screw up by connecting the Tokyo ghoul and the demon slayer? The hero changes his behavior 180 degrees stupidly because of one phrase about a pig. This is as stupid as possible and the author apparently could not think of anything more interesting and this pig will be mentioned even later.

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    Demon Slayer: Not Your Ordinary Demon
    Anime & Comics · GeekNovels
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak2yr
    Commented

    Pov: The same author of the system who inserts a description of the skills whose description we have seen 200 times in past chapters

    Ch 16 Nightmare Training
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    Beast Lord in Demon Slayer
    Anime & Comics · ASHARA
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak2yr
    Replied to cristian_sandoval

    I'm in Hokage: Play as Gojo Satoru at the Start

    Ch 129 128 Fight (3)
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    Naruto: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Navy_King
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak2yr
    Replied to Navy_King

    I apparently did not formulate the sentence correctly and Google Translate did not understand me. I wanted you to link to the original work

    Ch 129 128 Fight (3)
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    Naruto: The Template System
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak2yr
    Commented

    I have a question about fan fiction on that site with "Gojo"(Naruto: Mimic Gojo Satoru) . So is it a translation or an author's work, if it's a translation, can it be original?

    Ch 129 128 Fight (3)
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    Naruto: The Template System
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak2yr
    Commented

    Light is weight ... Have you ever been kicked at the speed of light?

    Ch 40 Disaster
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    Light Human In MHA
    Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak3yr
    Commented

    Jak to się mówi: "Kazirodztwo to sprawa rodzinna" As the saying goes: "Incest is a family affair"

    Ch 4 Changes x School x Pain
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    I Will Be Popular After Being In A Coma
    Anime & Comics · WorkingAuthor
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak3yr
    Commented

    You're underestimating us.

    Ch 74 Capítulo 72: ¿Es ella tan importante para ti?
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    Time Emperor (Champion)
    Anime & Comics · DE_LEON
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak3yr
    Commented

    Chadwick Boseman - who is it?

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    In Avatar World With Naruto System
    Anime & Comics · Dr_Chad
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  • Zby3ak
    Zby3ak3yr
    Commented

    My next comment doesn't make sense, so take it as a joke. "Author, there are actually 54 gender genders in the world. And what you use 2 is the oppression of the other 52" - a fighter for the oppression of cisgender people

    Ch 3 Chapter 3
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    In Avatar World With Naruto System
    Anime & Comics · Dr_Chad
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