Doesn't seem bad, but it feels like I've seen something similar before. Also the different types of cultivation systems can get abit confusing

That’s not true past me, Secret Arts only have one move. Aster’s “Secret Arts” are modified versions

I agree with past me

The fight scene could see some improvements

I'm here (after two chapters)!!! Not exactly my cup of tea, but looks pretty good :) Could be better though but we all improve right haha?

Thanks mate!

This is pretty interesting, plot is good, though not my favorite genre. Keep writing I'm sure it will be great! (BTW what's YULETIDE? Don't understand the name)

HAH I can already see a giant eagle in my dreams XD Gammer and stuff may need a fix but seems good. Keep writing I wanna see where this goes!

Self Review! Despite the 5 stars, I don't really think it's that good. Because of school and poor time management, updates will be erratic. I'm also new to writing, so character design, worldbuilding, and development will be rocky. Quality ain't the best, but feedback would help! [Quest: Self Review Complete!] [Gained Title: Shameless Author] [With luck and work, Title may evolve to Good Author!]

Hi Taco I'm hereeeeeeeee I am at the beginning, and it seems to be off to a good start. Main Character kinda cocky though. The names are... interesting but won't judge. Humor brightens up almost everything.

Thanks TacoKun for the poem XD I love Demon Slayer too

Cmon I'm tired of talking to myself, say something!!!

Cmon guys, no comments? I really could use your help and feedback here!