These two young boys have seen and been though a lot. Great chapter.

I'm already into this story.

I'm happy to see lil hound giving his boyfriend some them time.

I don't know why but I like Cain.

I might feel this way if an older guy had *** with my baby brother. But I hope at some point everyone cam move pass it all.

This chapter had me lol!

That female hound better calm down. She interrupted my Leo getting some more.

I don't smoke but I need a smoke right about now. Talk about hot! Where my fan at?

Leo please give it to the hound already! We both need this. lol!

Hot! Hot! Hot!

I was holding my breath the entire time I was reading this chapter! Talk about hot!

I hope the elf get some!

That was fire! I loved it all!

I'm not sure if I like or dislike the mother.

Oh my; this was a fantastic chapter. Wow!

My lil hound want his lil brother back.

I wasn't sure if the girl changed into a man or a fox like creature?

I really enjoyed this chapter! I love novels with supernatural creatures in it. Chapter is well written. Great job!

I was looking to read novels that I didn't see have comments. I was curious as to why. Your first chapter was really good. I can't understand why you don't have more comments. But i'm in the same boat. I don't have any comments for my novel. Again, your first chapter is good. I enjoyed it. Can't wait to read chapter 2.

This I must say is an extremely well worth chapter. I am always amazed at the creativity of people.