Hes only 3 though... usually 3 year olds are only just starting to put sentences together and they still talk pretty sloppily. I mean whatever, I guess this is just fantasy or somthin

Uhhhh wasnt his agility 0.36? Bruhhhh

Foreshadowing...

Small edit for the first sentence of this paragraph, "It seem{s} that the animals haven't mutated..."

Ive read ‘Sweet Home’ and I can see the similarities. I think its because of the tension and suspense, maybe a bit of horror?✨

Thank you! I just fixed it ☺️✨

I'm not sure why this paragraph ends with a "?"

Consider changing the ending sentence with, "... she purposely landed on the ground, leaving her with a few bruises. Although they hurt, she was tougher than she looked..."

The beginning of the paragraph is a little confusing, "...Time passed and the silence continued..."

This sentence has some weird wording, my edit would be, "...Her soft voice rung throughout the air, making sure the coachman was able to hear it..."

The last sentence of this paragraph is a little odd, it doesn't make much sense. Maybe change to, "...As time passed, she moved her gaze away from the sky and began to ponder..."

Minor mistakes, "...It was a carriage from a prominent family, normal carriages wouldn't be decorated so exquisitely..."

"Anna nodded her head in a yes."

Minor mistakes here and there, "Soon they reached the deepest part of the forest. The woman glanced at the girl and spoke, 'Now listen and look carefully.' The girl just nodded."