i never judge, but it helps when the author uses the correct word to convey the idea. using 2 different word that mean 2 different things makes the story confusing and less enjoyable, which is why I stopped reading this book. Consistency is key to keeping people interested.

This was the first novel I started to read when I got the Webnovel app. I am both happy and sad it has come to an end. Thank you Eve for one of the best stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading! (I say one of the best as Chaos Heir took the #1 spot after 5 chapters).

ok. so where are chapters 1367 to 1401? I just finished chapter 1366 and it jumps straight to 1402...

are you ok author? no updates for over 5 days. hope all is good.

Ves really has a psychological problem with his mother. Maybe a psychiatrist from the lifers group of his clan will do a "Freud" scene where Ves is on a couch and the psych asks him questions about his mother...🤣🤣🤣

Lodney... too funny... I laugh every time I read it.

not happy about having to purchase privilege to complete this novel. haven't wepaid enough already???

A pages turner and coin burner. This novel just grabs you and thrusts you into the thick of things. Each chapter better than the last. Character development is exceptional. I highly recommend this novel for those that love the fantasy genre.

and now there is less than 1 chapter a day... this book as good as it is has just fallen off my reading list now. if you were more consistent in releasing chapters then I would buy privilege chapters again, but as it is it would just be a waste of money. very disappointed...

while this is a great story the fact that it is only a chapter a day loses 1 of my 2 votes every day. other books I am currently reading release 2 or 3 chapters a day which makes reading more enjoyable.

Exceptional novel. Well written and thought out. Chapter unlocks a tad pricey. Needed almost a years worth of fast passes and many many trips to the coin store... but it was worth it in the end.

FOTNS... now that was a good Manga Movie... First saw that in my early 20s... more than 20 years ago... Another good one for scenes like that was the original Ninja Scroll... The stone guy with the double bladed sword that he throws...

inspector??? or instructor??? I think it should be instructor

casted is not an actual word. The word you are looking for is cast. example... Benjamin cast the spell successfully... or... The casting of Benjamin's spell was interrupted. Please fix this as my mind hurts everytime I see a word which does not make sense or fit with the actions of the characters.

ouch... that hurt...

A good read from start to finish. really enjoyed this novel. Some parts could have had more and some less but over all a well written story.

I thought the 3 levels of Darkness eye were delude, dispel and disintergrate. Why do you always say the dispel is the 3rd level???

This novel just gets better with time. I was hooked from the start when I read the first chapter. Background of the characters and worlds, aspects of the diverse civilisation that humanity has become. I just wish it was more that 3 chapters a day!

why Quint? Quint is short for quintuple... which is 5... but there are only 4 configurations... so Quad would be better... unless it is for the number of gems used... in which case quint makes sense.

Worked for me... so he is not as delusional as you think.