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yeah I realized, I honestly made that entire comment simply to say that I nerded out on a fantasy story. I really like this novel and I hope to see you continue the good work!
yeah I realized, good work on the story BTW. I mostly made this comment because I wanted to be funny yet I was running on two hours of sleep in the span of 26 hours. it looked and sounded better in my head but I can't really tell if its funny or not lol 💀
yes I spent the time to make this to prove my point lol
Honestly I want to make the comment that it doesn't make a difference what isdis is wearing since gravity would be pulling her at the same speed as alicia, furthermore alicia who is passed out would probably be free falling straight down making her decent much faster. However this is a fantasy novel and depending on how isdis moves she might have been able to catch up... Think of it like this when you sky dive before you release your parachute usually you would spread your limbs to make yourself have a larger surface area, then to go faster you would face that direction(below you) and put your limbs together to make yourself more aerodynamic. simply put even if she had heavier armor, if she doesn't move properly she shouldn't have a chance at reaching alicia. P.S. Yes, I literally just went full on nerd mode because of a potentially factually incorrect paragraph on whether one character could catch the other mid air due to gravity, in a fantasy webnovel with monsters magic gods and the like. Was it necessary, no absolutely not, was it funny and enjoyable for me to write, yes, it very much was so. So much so that I specifically "corrected" it so I can make this joke...
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