Haperitz

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

2nd read through, I am amazed at how much the author built of, how all these moments in the beginning affect chapters 400+. Nice to see that nothing went to waste!

There is nothing wrong with good wholesomeness. Thank you for the balancing act with that, I appreciate that your story is creative and adds to the show instead of show but insert adult stuff here

This is my 3rd reread. I love this story and the characters. Some simple grammar errors, but you can see the author get better as time goes by.

flareon has changed to vaporeon, go evee!

so Dragon Evee? i love it, gota catch em all!