Should probably add Villain MC into the tags. Good chapter otherwise.

What about Feifei's soul lantern? Is that just not a thing anymore?

I have a question. Why do weapons awaken a weapon spirit and need special cultivation techniques when we saw a mountain become a girl and be a completely normal cultivator?

Thanks for the chapter.

a total of three and half days in total... You should probs fix that. Thanks for the chapter. Is it just me or did Noah become meeker since the start of the story?

Thanks for the chapter! The world seems mroe dangerous than I though

Just continue from here .no need to rewrite

Bit over done with the fucks I think.

Is he getting a pet/friend? Can portal monsters be tamed? Hmm, if yes he could get free durable clothes

Plausible

Were the others pulled in so fast it seemed like they disappeared?

I hope you return with better grammar. No offense but sometimes my eyes hurt from seeing the mistakes. Otherwise it was a good ero novel

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter. There is some gibberish at the end.

Nothing stood out to me as retcon worthy. You can keep it as is. I just want more of the story

1) By being born into the world naturally you mean no isekai knowledge or plain reincarnation? I am fine with how it was handled in this version, and I would like to see him weave himself into the world, not be born into it and be slapped with a family problems. 2) The suicide attempt was handled beatifully and unless it happends like every other chapter it will be fine as is. 3) As others have said, I prefer story with ***, not the other way around. 4) What do I know? Mike? Mathew? George? 5) Keep him as is. Kind, decently confident and not a fidgety teenager, capable of solving things.

The premise of the story itself is alright good even, but it reads like a badly translated novel. I highly recommend getting an editor. The quality of the story would rise by a big margin.