DuskArcanist

I have no clue how the author is juggling through so many different books, but kudos to you. You're able to create convincing characters in this one and I look forward to more!

Not sure if this says something about me, but I couldn't help but laugh a few times despite the bullying that is happening... Oh well, it's a good story, all I would say is in Chapter 1 probably shorten the worldbuilding a tiny bit so we get into the story quickly.

Nice and polished grammar and overall structure. Update rate is good as well, and I am a sucker for system novels so I would definitely recommend to you all :P

Enjoyed reading through the book. For my taste the paragraphs can sometimes be a bit on the long end, however nonetheless it's a very entertaining read. Romance again isn't my cup of tea however I can see the appeal of the story! Good luck!

For somebody who doesn't have English as a first language this is impressive. There aren't too many errors or at least I didn't make many out. Would recommend you write up a few more chapters and then release them daily to get your viewer numbers up! Good luck!

There definitely is a lack of updates to be seen. I would also say work on less rumbustious descriptions, they are sometimes a bit much to read. Overall though, good beginning to a story and I hope you continue writing and get into a consistent groove of it. :P

Spelling error, Reflection*

Hello everyone, author here. I have returned to Webnovel after almost a whole year. It has been a laborious time at my university, however I am ready to create something new for you all to enjoy! Hope you've been doing well during this godforsaken pandemic :P