Great chapter

Brilliant start

What a bloody start.

I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!! I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!

The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging. The updates have been regular. Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come. Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.

I have only just started reading and already I hope to see the character develop more with his system and read what he will do with it I hope you don't leave the system out too much.

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This novel description seems very much interesting 😃😃 and it even a new kind of a novel. I hope the author a good luck and please make it great to read ❤️😊❤️😊❤️😊❤️

I have read the novel Frist 20 chapters and it was really interesting and great to read. Its even better than the description ❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️ It is both funny and amazing novel. Hope the author will continue like that 😉

I have read the novel Frist 20 chapters and it was really interesting and great to read . even better than the description ❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️ It is both funny and amazing novel. Hope the author will continue like that 😉

Woah!! Such an amazingly written book 🤩 Firstly the wonderful writing and wordings attracted my attention😍 Then this interesting plot just drew me into reading it further👍🏻 Great job done by the author writing this beautifully written work.👏🏻👏🏻

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Keep up the good work 👍👍👍

Keep up the good work 👍👍👍

Interesting 👍👍👍

Thanks for the updates

Thanks for the updates

Thanks for the update

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