StrayCl
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StrayCl7mthPostedThis story is truly captivating. Although it begins slowly, it is gratifying to see how the protagonist experiences constant progress, improving his performance throughout the plot. The narrative introduces an intriguing realism to the universe we already know, readjusting the scales of power and correcting the inconsistencies that existed in the original story. This is definitely not a story for those looking for an extremely powerful protagonist from the start.
- StrayCl1yrCommented
nice spoiler
DISCLAIMER: Because of the comments I re-edited the chapter and now the match will be longer. I hope it is better but it doesn't change the fact that Seido will be losing to Komadai Fujimaki. - StrayCl2yrCommentedThis chapter has been deleted.
- StrayCl2yrCommentedHe began to think, with a thoughtful expression, 'Hmm, is that one Characteristic of the Deino Species? At least I read that It tends to bite everything after it's born. Although later it should have less of the urge to want to bite everything, even if it did not say exactly when that is the case. It is probably always different. ...I hope it's just a phase and he won't do it much longer. '
- StrayCl2yrCommentedThis chapter has been deleted.