I like this one

Hello, Writers block with sky island, scrapped so many drafts as it not keeping true to what I want and hope for the story. I have drafted the test but then my drafts and finish products are always different. I am also writing another books at the same time which is not getting as much love as this (heartbroken) I will try to push a few chapters out soon.

true, i already altered the direction Robin. Supposed to thinking of them as the original strawhat, I'm just looking at them as children, Nami, Nojiko, Coby, Helmppo, Chopper, Sanji, Zoro, Jonny, Yosaku all of them as marines not just the 7 more so although Luffy has a lot of responsibility I don't think I would put him as a captain (since the story is not about him). in a few chapters you will see why even if they didn't meet in the academy as they did in the story, they would have to meet at the end of the book.

Kembali dan baca beberapa bab kembali. Saya melakukan hal yang sama! Saya memiliki banyak draf tetapi untuk membuat cerita terhubung saya harus melakukannya.

I was going with the they are predestined to meet but then again I just realised in all my draft I never gave them any spot light pass them gathering…

Hello All! I am the Author of this book. It is with great pleasure that I share with you a book which I wrote when times were hard during the pandemic. It was lost and forgotten due to my other work "The Greatest Marine in Onepiece Universe", I only recently rediscovered it and I have fallen in love with the story once more. I want to share this story of a boy called Caleb as he makes his way through a world where martial arts is the foundation but the enemy is hidden, the mastermind behind all the destruction. What side will Caleb stand on? will he become the champion for the people or their oppressor? Find out in the Book 1: Caleb's Martial Journey!

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Thanks, i guess so. I was very keen on keeping to the timeline and connecting the story to what I had in the ending that I had to throw in Luffy and his lot without changing their connections

He gets the fruit in v1. gets info from marines about fruit in v1. V3 he gets o find out what the fit really is

Im just very busy at the moment. Travelling for work or Looking after the kids (schools are on holiday). I am not going to drop it. We will all get to the end together.

Skull doesnt know Haki

Supetr busy at the moment, I will try make time to get 2 chapters done

Intentional

Ok kid

Dunno how to add it in, the story is already complicated enough to add love into the mix

Thanks for the God-awful comment. You have done nothing but nitpick all the way to 84. Not understanding the fruit. Marines etc it doesn’t take half a brain as you said to get those (but you didn’t) The fanfic is writing with the introduction of the MC to the timeline after Gold Roger. His addition cause ripples those affected the world? You are upset cuz Luffy is not the focus of the book? V4 is written outside the timeline and this is a what if one piece went this way. What if there were Gods who fell into the world. What if Mary Gorosei is actually a person, the God from the God Clan? What if Uranus is the God from Dovah (the name given to the one piece world)? What if the battle between them erased from history was a battle to ascend back to a God? You complain that the WG left the MC alone even when they knew he is Uranus? Uranus is a God? MC has the Umi Umi no Mi but they tried to restrain him and it backfired. if we look at the canon the WG knew luffy’s fruit was not gomu gomu no mi but did they chase him to the ends no! The only time we saw something that pointed its importance is when IM carried pictures of luffy, Blackbeard, vivi and Shiraoshi. But nothing was done until he was about to awaken so how did it break one piece??? Thanks for reading! All I can say is you didn’t like it for your own reasons. But doesn’t mean you should give affect others from reading the book.

Thanks anyways. I won’t stoop to your level to rudely reply to you. The WG also knew Luffy’s fruit was not the Gomu Gomu no mi from the start and I didnt see them do anything special until he was about to awaken. Yes he had Umi Umi no Mi but that doesn’t make him Uranus. Uranus is a dragon which doesn’t fall into fruit category. There is a different between something being wrong or something taking a different view on the world. You want the MC to be a member of the strawhats, everything to follow the original works? You complain about his fruit? Sea water? Celestials? Marines? This is a one piece fanfic that take a different route and has a different take on the whole story. I.e The God clan are aliens! we already know aliens exist in one piece. If they are aliens why can’t they destroy part of their power and then control the narrative making another void in history. I thought readers would be smart enough to reach this conclusion Anyways thanks for the comment. For the people that like it and are still reading it I will continue to write it.

he will get it later

My thought on the fruit is for the power to behave like the sea, not just the water. Controlling the water is a part of it but the same effect the sea will have, including the unextracted seastone/pyrobloin effect. The name of the fruit details what I wanted from the fruit UMI UMI NO MI = SEA SEA FRUIT, not Seawater Seawater Fruit. This is why the MC is not affected by the Sea because he is the Sea. In the later chapters, you will find he touches on Haki, masters Rokushiki and excels in spearmanship. I hope this helps

Sorry, I disagree Let’s use Luffy as an example. Everyone thought it was a paramecia fruit for a long time, then May be special paramecia only to find out it was a mythical zoan. The fruit from its conception was a special paramecia fruit not a logia. So why would it be wrong. I never revealed this until v3C5, what was revealed was the marines perception of the complete fruit being a logia. So how is that wrong. I did not want to spoil it for people but, there you have it. Umi umi no mi is a special paramecia fruit the MC will get the info when he gets to fishman island and learn he only has 1/3 of Uranus power.