Thanks so much for the feedback man! This was my first writing and to this day I'm still improving with the help of my father who also does writing as a hobby. Hopefully you'll take intrest in the final copy of my new book!

As it stands currently, this is one of my first few writings. As I've grown as a writer, I tend to take a look back at older work and I believe this is a solid one-shot. Trapped, does it's job of conveying a good story and leaving off at a good cliffhanger.