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thanks for the chapter love what im seeing

if you where talking about communism if not please disregard I get talky when im tiered

communism isn't a bad principle by its base nature but the way it has been used in the past was so twisted and corrupt that it never had the chance to work in the first place. If the soviet union wasn't such an isolationist country and so against the investment from powers outside the state (as well as not being headed by monstrous tyrants that believed themselves gods from a wiff of power) communism had a real chance of being a viable economic strategy in the short term, though a true long term viable plan is a mix between communism and capitalism as both individually start crumbling from within given enough time (look at the current state of the world if you want some proof on the capitalist part, when to much money is centralised within one group 99% of the population will always suffer)

fist I will say this is a good start. the grammar and sentence structure work well and it flows well, but if you are going to do a fan-fic you need to take in to account how the characters act within the source material silco is refinement covering viscous hatred "in the bag" wouldn't be something he says in a thousand years, now this isnt going to put me off reading at all I just thought it would be worth mentioning for future reference for other dialog and characters. looking forward to read on.

it was midnight when I started reading... its now like 4..... sleeps OK reading better

good fanfics are hard to find and by all the gods is this a good one. cant wait to read on.

how you didn't get a like for this sooner I don't know.

in a world where the strongest hero just asks reality to do shit for her and a mouse is more intelligent than 99.99999999999999(∞ recurring)% of the population u draw the line at sentient code?