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PeterGriffith

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"Wisdom has been chasing you, but somehow you are faster." -

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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith2d
    Commented

    KEEP COOKING!

    Ch 46 Battle of New York Part 1(Edited)
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    Marvel: Abysmal Spider-Man
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith2d
    Commented

    It's jarring to read, I've been confused in this single chapter more then reading mathematic formula.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2:The Sword Caliburn
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    King Arthur Won't Die by Accident
    Anime & Comics · Trash_Prospector
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith7d
    Replied to EndOneXD
    In this world where gods gave blessings to mortals on a whim, it was a wonder why they didn't deal with it. Actually, it wasn't wonder at all. Gods seek one thing, and one thing only, Entertainment.
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    Danmachi: The Black Hole
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith8d
    Replied to Martian_Fridge

    yeah, just showing a paragraph or two of him training himself or just about to finish. Instead of a sentence of "oh yeah I put bricks in my shadow" ain't that just lackluster? just a paragraph or two would suffice so readers wont get bored of reading him training. I kinda forget sometimes that WebN doesn't really have writing like AO3 or RR so I forget to lower my standards.

    ...That was around 25-30 pounds worth of Bento. I estimated according to the weight I felt.
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    Jujutsu Reincarnation: Unleashing The Ten Shadows In Naruto
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith12d
    Commented

    0 feats, 7 kamikaze attempts

    My gaze turns serious as I tilt my head to look at him. "We are going to lay some ground rules. The first thing is that attitude needs to go. Second, we are going to talk about your tenth Shikigami. If you can utilize your cursed technique, you'll become a walking calamity. However, if you don't do anything, all you will ever be is potential man."
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith21d
    Commented

    No wonder your fanfics aren't getting attraction, all of em are MTL level. I'm kinda surprised that you're still this bad at it when you have this many scuffed "stories" under your belt already.

    Ch 3 Water seven
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    One piece: Snake Empress
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith22d
    Replied to NimtheWriter

    accept the L my guy, it's fine.

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    A Fake Familiar Reborn
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith24d
    Replied to unit_201

    so... when's the next chapter?

    Though my top speed is faster than anything man-made, I'm not faster than light. Meaning that the instant I open this door the guy will be flooded with sunlight, yet the moment I try to leave and find another exit the half-liquid blob can just open the door I'm forcing closed.
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    I am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith24d
    Commented

    nope, I've seen it done 6th time I think? maybe more.

    Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is the only FGO fic that has ever destroyed a Grail.
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    I am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith24d
    Replied to unit_201

    Then why did he choose her of all the other characters he could have chosen? that's kinda dumb to begin with ain't it?

    Though my top speed is faster than anything man-made, I'm not faster than light. Meaning that the instant I open this door the guy will be flooded with sunlight, yet the moment I try to leave and find another exit the half-liquid blob can just open the door I'm forcing closed.
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    I am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith24d
    Replied to Outer_God_Azathoth

    This is a joke right?

    Ch 4 When People Breaks.
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    I am a Peerless Hero without equal! (WC/SCP - When Day Breaks start)
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith29d
    Commented

    It's been 5 years since I gave a system story a chance, I'll try to see where this leads me to.

    Ch 5 The Mothership
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    Domination: Limitless Growth
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Commented

    where are the: "...." when the characters are talking? It gets really confusing without those.

    Ch 1 First Encounter with Bandits
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    One Punch Man in One Piece
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Replied to Yagaht

    yeah, it's used a lot in AO3

    It's one of the disadvantage of writing in 1st POV.
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Commented

    too convoluted, you need to simplify.

    "If it can grant any one wish, why don't you just wish from him to save your world. But I don't think that you are that stupid that you didn't try or think of that, are there limitations on that cup of reincarnation or something like that you just can't intervene in that world that much?" Madara quickly deduced the situation, but he wasn't finished just yet as he continued, "Or these supposed threats known as Monarchs which destroy or bring destruction to that world of yours, even if you take that cup of reincarnation power to bring any one of your wishes true, that which can only take care of any one single Monarch, which left other Monarchs which you will fight and fight over and over again while this world continues to being destroyed and you will not have that cup power to turn back time to your supposed advantage."
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    Madara Uchiha In Solo Leveling
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Replied to Hkj

    So... you have anything to say about the reply they gave?

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    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Commented

    the student council pres and vice, It'd be interesting to see more interaction with em.

    Other then that I am interested to know what are your favorite characters in cote? What are you favorite characters in this novel so far and which characters would you like to see Eru interact with more?
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    COTE: L Lawliet In The Classroom Of The Elite
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Replied to 3PoundsOfRice

    kinda a mix of both

    Ch 10 Infamous
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Replied to TJ_Rose

    say that to the school shooters, kids or adults it doesn't matter you'll still be taught how to do self control.

    Ch 60 Chapter 60. The End
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    Avatar The Last Airbender: Not Avatar
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  • PeterGriffith
    PeterGriffith1mth
    Commented

    by making this chapter your just acknowledging em more, kinda counterproductive.

    Ch 16 A/N
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
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