SungJinTu

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SungJinTu9 hours ago
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"Yes, ever since I was young, before even founding the Mapple corp. I dreamed of being an archaeologist traveling to exotic places and uncovering all sorts of mysteries but, a dream is just a dream and in the end I fell prey of my own success. When I founded the Mapple corp. my responsabilities were too great and I kept postponing my dream, but now that my son took over the business and I'm retired I can finally do whatever I want." Walter spoke with a melancholic voice that showed how much he regretted wasting all those years working non stop, but there was still a glint of hope in his eyes.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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To
"Yes, ever since I was young, before even founding the Mapple corp. I dreamed of being an archaeologist traveling to exotic places and uncovering all sorts of mysteries but, a dream is just a dream and in the end I fell prey of my own success. When I founded the Mapple corp. my responsabilities were too great and I kept postponing my dream, but now that my son took over the business and I'm retired I can finally do whatever I want." Walter spoke with a melancholic voice that showed how much he regretted wasting all those years working non stop, but there was still a glint of hope in his eyes.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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These
The place was the Mapple corp. headquarters and there were about twenty bodyguards waiting for them already, each and everyone taller and more muscular than the average soldier all dressed in what looked like really expensive clothes. 'This clothes... I've seen them before.' Uriel pondered as he gazed at the long coats. Those were Mapple corp employees and they were all of the ascended rank.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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The author only has this one particular plot mechanism. He will use it repeatedly and spam it for all its worth until it no longer works.
"This is a Nikola, it's able to drive on its own and it's unaffected by cryptids' FOD so I could technically take that baby even to incursions without any issues." Nika said with a smug grin as she watched the miraculous car park on its own.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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With
Luna: I can't answer the phone, I'm too busy in a project. Don't bother me.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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Thinking of
"Calm down, Sage, we won't get any credits for that either. I think it's only fair that we give the full amount of the bounty to Atomic's family." Said Miss Dragonfang thinking on the young student that fell valiantly fighting against the sly creature.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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Enjoyed a great deal of fame
When the supervisor showed up he respectfully greeted Miss Dragonfang first and then proceeded to assess the students trying to figure out their participation in the incursion. Phlox was obviously a bit older and was easily identified by the supervisor as the former corporal in Miss Dragonfang's army unit, then there was Luna, the short student who successfully performed a surgery on a fallen comrade to save her life, followed by Sam the 'Lightbringer' who already enjoyed from a great deal of fame in the city after being the one responsible for saving so many lives during his first incursion and just after receiving his trait. He then shook their hands amicably one by one showing the utmost respect for the group of young students that outperformed everyone in their generation. When it was Uriel's turn to be greeted, though, the supervisor left him with the hand extended and ignored him completely.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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That were the
She didn't know, though, that those students had managed to kill a cryptid so strong, so vicious, not even the army had been able to deal with it. The skinwalker had been the bane of many soldiers and hunters alike, and in the end it was nothing but a bunch of kids with traits unsuited for battle the ones who finally killed it.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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Cost* not costed.
"Why does this sort of thing always happen to me? I can't do anything right, and now it costed the life of a young man." Another tear trickled down her cheek threatening to break a dam of tears that would leave her dry. When she went downstairs to the shopping mall searching for clothes to wear she also took the chance to find Atomic's body and it pained her to see him all tore apart.
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Urban · NanaiSensei
SungJinTu9 hours ago
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Use a different adverb here.
The group watched in disbelief as the tall shadowy creature bowed down fashionly and turned on its heels leaving them alone.
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Urban · NanaiSensei