Thank you for your thoughts. And their will be one more chapter like like 48-50. Sorry but I have to end that arc before going back to the battles again. And I'm currently having trouble making the next chapters but I will update it soon.

It's not dropped. I'm just trying to brainstorm the next chapters and it's honestly causing problems for me. Since so many readers didn't want Waneta as an mc like I planned I had to redo a few things. But don't worry. I have no plans if dropping this book. It's come to far for me to just drop it.

Yeah I understand. I'm still kind of new to writing and didn't know if I should have an mc or not. This story was honestly supposed to be me testing the waters and getting some feedback on how to improve. I'll keep the story the same If you're wondering but the next chapter will still be about Waneta. I need to finish this arc and not leave it open like this. And Waneta wasn't some chosen one like Anakin. The father just wanted to keep her from freeing her mother. I'm just going to make another story as Waneta as the mc starting from a child to an adult. Many of you probably don't care about this which is why I may post that story on another platform. I don't feel like seeing negative reviews just because they don't like the character.

Why do so many of you want 40k in the starwars universe? I have nothing against it and it's a great concept but that would literally be overkill if even a single fleet went against the starwars universe. Only people I could see giving them a hard time is Luke and Abeloth. And thanks for liking my story. It means a lot.

Wow. Didn't think my story would be considered one of the three decent stories you found. Kind of makes me glad you think my story isn't totally trash.

If you don't know who the MC is than I must have done a good job. There was supposed to be no MC to begin with but than Waneta came in and I picked a liking towards her. I'm thinking about just keeping the story as I had it and making a different story just on waneta going from her childhood to an adult.

This is basically the mortis arc when Anakin, Obi-wan, and Ashoka met the god like beings being the father, son, and daughter. It's a long story but Waneta is caught in the middle of them because of her being the daughter of Abeloth (originally the mother) I don't know if you care about all this but the battles will return in two more chapters. Master chief and the Arbiter will have more spotlight in them.

If anyone sees this please answer this question. So you all prefer the story switching pov every now and than or have an actual mc? I didn't know if anyone liked reading stories like this so I was actually thinking about transitioning her to be the mc. If you liked it like this though I'll keep it like this. But Waneta will still have a major role in this story. Planning to have chief and the Arbiter in more conflicts as well if your wondering.

Switching. There really isn't an mc in this story.

forgot to show this but this is what the Mand'alor looks like

That's because it works similar to a Harrow ship which was basically what the venator was based on. I thought it was a Harrow ship when I first looked at it but the bridge is structured differently so it isn't the same ship. But I'm making them similar to each other either way. And I thought the mandalorians had venators once they completely entered the conflict with the republic which they just entered in by the way? The two other ships are from legends which the mandalorians had and the terrans had helped them build a few of them already. Still confused?

Yes. The only ship I think isn't from starwars is the one with the red engines.

I didn't know that and the prologue was talking about how Zeridian was found by them when the CIS was formed. This is all going after about a year of war between the republic and separatist. I don't know if the Arquitens were used during this time though.

Her real full name is Irizi'ar'alani or ziara which was her core name but once they reach a certain rank in the navy. Their ties to their family is gone. I think they did this, so a family couldn't try to get more power over everyone but i'm not 100% sure. So her name is literally just Ar'alani or Ziara. Also a core name is just a shortened name the chiss use when others can't pronounce their full name.

yeah I made a few mistakes when I made this story a while back.😅

yes. I used to love playing that game when it first came out. It was honestly the game that got me into halo in the first place.

Warning: This contains a few spoilers. read at your on risk I hadn't really thought about putting in anymore factions in the story, but the titan fall one is a good one. I might put that in, but the mass effect one is a no. I have zero knowledge about that universe. never played a single game before. I already have a few plans for the Jedi. more specifically waneta. I'ma drop a little hint, but there's a reason why she was the only one to survive an ONI project. the flood is definitely not going to be in this. the halo universe could barley contain them and if they somehow made it in starwars...Yeah they all dead at least in my opinion.

They will make an appearance as you read on, but that's past chapter 25 if I'm correct. The only thing I know I'm not putting in is the Flood and Banished.