Thanatos_System

+1

I need more of this. The author is cooking.

Awesome work so far and can’t wait to see where this story goes! Keep up the good work.

This is a legitimately great read, there is little to no grammar or sentence structure issues, and contains a lot of worthwhile content. The writing quality is superb, the author updates quite often and consistently, and the story and character development are quite in-depth. The world or should I say liberty development is quite deep and still touches along many of the actual 30K/40K plotlines with a touch of added primarch humor. And sweet liberty does it tell a good story! Hope to see this story continued because Franklin still has much humor to spread to the rest of his brothers in arms.

This made me laugh! 😂

+1, systems are overdone

Just no, enough said.

Second choice. It’s a great story and I’d rather see ya come up with something inventive to get things moving again than have to go back and rewrite stuff. Take your time figuring it out and it’ll be as amazing as the rest of the story up to this point. Awesome work!