You done f*cked up now boys.

MC is gonna be a celestial ? Much wow

That was evil. I love it !

Amazing story with the research done about the harry potter world lore. The characters are growing up, not just a copy/paste from the books, there is reason for things happening thought the events ( stone/basilisk/animagus/tournament ) are the same over the years. I'm around ch.450 and couldn't resist a few peaks into the future ( ~950 for now ) and it brings me to why I'm dropping it despite a good review. Plotting, helpless and hopeless things, like a noose tighening, the hp lore is a dark one and rightfully so. I enjoy a fair amount of realism but stuff like hydra breathing down their neck everywhere, her magic starting going bad ( ~ch.450 ) and the forced marriage of pureblood ( Rowan got one too way later but nothing is set down ), all of it weight down and I don't really enjoy such a dark story. Tho, it is due to my own taste and I wholeheartedly awknoledge that the story is a great find if it fits your niche. It was a nice read till now, thanks you for your hard work dear author and I hope you enjoy continuing writing !

Ooooh YEAH the scam of death baby will made it, Orthar couldn't plan around that ahahah ! That was an amazing journey, thank you for all the work !

So we get some light shed on the 'dreams' parts but I still smell something fishy, that will etch the story and this ending into the heart of the audience

Bloody paradise, the slow release is wrecking my heart

*intelligible painfull screeches* please no

The build up is killing me

How long he has left to live ? Ominous thought ma boi Gravis, I fear the incoming chapters

Orochimaru at the start of the chapter : Mhh yes murder invasion kidnapping monster ninjas I'm so smart. -> Orochimaru at the end of the chapter : I'm screwed to the moon and back ?

Hope you continue enjoying writing for a long while as I finished ~410 chapters in a few days as it got me really hooked. Thank you for your hard work !** The end got deleted, weird.

I don't know how much fanfiction of this type exist, but it feels really good to read something this serious and brutal/gore honest about the world of naruto that is filled with so much bull in the manga. Ninja life is a sad life when you look at it and even with all the work done, they remain as murder for hire in the end so seeing someone coming into this world to survive is really intertaining. The origin of his talents and the sole fact the bond worked this way throught their soul in the end is the sole point that I am peeved about but hey, to be honest it doesn't give an overwhelming boost as he needs to work for it. Him picking more women thus making the bond less special is something more about you as you pointed in one of your notes that meh. Otherwise, world building, power progression, political scheming and our Rei having a focus goal of living happily with his women/family translating to put their life then safety then happiness above all else is really well done and I love it ! I can't wait to see how far this can go once the storms in the element nations calm down, you mixed other anime/manga well enough with Claymore/Akame Ga Kill and another one? with the east that is still a mystery then we have space with the Otsutsuki and more open possibilities ? Nice to stay free enough about what you can write about. Hope you continue enjoying writing for a long while as I finished ~410 chapters in a few days as it got me really hooked, thank you for your hard work !

This cliffanger is mean, I can't wait for tomorrow

The feeeeels ! My kokoro is brokoko ...

Blind guess, Cera might have gained feelings and wanted to repair her relation with Gravis but she still focused so much on power that accepting help from a heaven magnate that is her father who she wanted him to accept her new strong self will be too difficult. That and for the other too, the feeling of safety that will stop them from seeing everything as much as dangerous from now on ?

Arc, Manuel, Yersi, our plant couple and our two main couple ? I had expected as much in term of survivor because of their talent but it really doesn't help after seeing the cute Cera vs Aris matchup last time.

Holy, when you look at it : elemental laws, this one life law, one fight to reach top divine god will aura, one fight to push the will aura further and then just some money/energy that he will get during the war to reach heaven's breaker ? The end is coming super fast and I didn't even felt it.

Yep, that was 100% a Gravis thing here

I reeaaally want Gravis to be like "Hey sup' big sis' !"