A unique story. An oc Nara that's basically a genuis/prodigy with monstrous never-before-seen talent and bloodline. Characters are fleshed out fairly well, plot is coherent and worldbuilding seems to be great. Powerful levels are semi-defined, which i love. Overall, a great story. My critique for now is how the reactions and behaviours of some characters don't necessarily match my expectations of the actual characters in the actual anime. But i guess that's why this is a fanfiction.

Great novel. Nice integration with real world factors. Great character development and progression of storyline. Some mini plot lines are not expounded upon clearly, however it's still a satisfying and enjoyable read.

finally, the timeskip

mmhmmn...

Awaiting mask's sales pitch....

It looked like it might have been a bit interesting. Until I actually started to read it. The sentence formation, the grammar is all not up to par. Needs a lot of improvement. . . . .

Kyon's backup plans have backup plans..lol

An interesting read. MC is kinda not too sharp and slow to act. Love the originality of the characters though. Great work but chapters are very short.

just how strong is this Ace guy???

Expertly written. I love the MC; genius, vengeful and absolutely cunning. The whole story comes together well enough with the right amount of humour and intrigue.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon