JDog04

A reboot will be interesting

I wish you luck on your recovery and make sure you sue the basterd who put it there if you get a chance.

Books great and all but if you want money for your writing so bad don’t post it freely just sell it on Patreon only and not demand money for more releases. If there were a set price to buy the whole story like a normal book publishers do I understand but not this it’s annoying. Just avoid reading books from this author.

The best Star Wars the old republic fanfiction of the year. Keep up the great work!!

The author doesn’t update unless you subscribe to his Patreon or give 1,000 stones and this book might be stolen from another author because I think I’ve read a book similar to this one. I love the book but the author is just greedy for stones and Patreon subscribers so this just kills the enjoyment I had for the book. Writing quality is good but could be better and the story’s mc doesn’t just rely on the force instead of learning him self.

We all know there are monsters on old Valyrian so what if there are mutated dragons who can’t fly and they are as large as a rhino with no wings and ability to breathe fire. Also add the banished general challenge a alpha male of a rhino pack and tame it and the group to make a small group of 2/3 armored rhino charging units to destroy the front of the army and heavy the knights follow up behind. The rhino’s are found first and tamed to a extent and then ship the females and young ones back to the king so he can raise them as war animals. Have a ark where the Prussian king give a private piece of land to have his assassin live with there children in a hidden forest in the hills where there fortress/camp is at. For the dragon there not easy to tame or raise since they don’t have Valyrian blood but they also are kind of nice to people of Valyrian blood but don’t bind to them because of there degrading nature. The land dragons can be tamed by any one if they are raised from a egg which takes a 6 months to a year to hatch in cold dark places. They also don’t have great vision like elephants but great since of smell which is how they see the world like snakes. That’s why you can tame them to a extent like a dog who thinks as you as family but will attack you if you hurt them. The inland where they are found is covered with mist and the animals have adapted and evolved so that why some dragons died off while others learned not to use there wings because you can’t see your prey in the sky. The land dragons have tough scales because they live in cave and they fight all the time with other creatures to survive and there species has learned to lay 5 to 6 eggs per female because most don’t survive to adulthood either by starvation because the mother feeds them until there 6 months as big as a 1 year old cat then they hunt on there own. They have tough scales stronger then normal dragons there age, stronger bones and more powerful but comes at a cost of flexibility and agility, smart hunters and are omnivores but meat is needed constantly for healthy growth, eat certain plants that help them clout faster from wounds and provides a antibiotic effect for them(some animals like monkeys actually do eat plants with certain effects).

Great book and great ending. I enjoyed the development of the characters and how all the major characters each had a good ending. One major surprise and I loved it is how mc died as hitler and then went back to his previous body in the new world he helped create.

The story was okay at first but when author gets to chapter 150 or so starts using ai completely ruined the novel for me and not most of the chapters are like a Chinese light novel explaining stuff just in details none stop. A lot of authors are using so and it’s ruining their stories please stop using it and write it your self. I love the beginning of the story but it now another great book ruined by ai book writing.

Looks epic

Keep going this is a good rewrite loving the new beginning with this. The old chapter was not that great with the mc character but I loving this new mc in the rewrite.