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speedyturtle1mthPostedOverall I like this book but I have two main points that I find aggravating about this story. 1) The grammar and way things are said in this book sometimes doesn’t make sense or does flow well for example sometimes the author would mean strong but accidentally somehow wrote weak and you have to infer the correct word via context clues. 2) This book is expensive. Each chapter to unlock costs 15 coins. And 250 coins costs $5 (asuming you didn’t get a discount) that’s about 16 chapters per $5 and about $30 for 100 chapters (I’m rounding it’s not exact numbers) and considering the book has 800+ chapters it would cost about (estimated not exact) $240 to unlock all current chapters for a book with not even correct grammar… that’s why I’ll be sadly dropping this book. It’s just not worth it for me.
- speedyturtle9mthCommented
Show you the….? Show you the??? Show you the what!?!? 🤣
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Yes.
--AN) I need a vote on whether or not to add both mother and daughter to the family. Just a simple reply to this with a YES or NO will do. Also, the back story dealing with Ishtar and Tammuz is not entirely true, as I needed to make up a few things to fit the story. If you are interested in Mesopotamia gods, a quick google search on Ishtar and Tammuz will suffice to find out their true backstory. It is quite interesting.-- - speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 406 State Funeral
- speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 405 In the Name of God
- speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 474 The Kind-Hearted Yet Easily Offended Deity Of The Sky
- speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 102 Massage - Part 1
- speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 102 Massage - Part 1
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- speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 102 Massage - Part 1
- speedyturtle2yrCommented
Lately ever since youve started the New type of Writing where you split up the perspectives, It feels like your chapters are way to short. Particularly because of how the status seems to take up a big chunk of the chapter. We have to wait for alot of chapters just to feel like we got through one conversation. Just some constructive criticism. Love the over all story looking forward to you actually getting on with it LOL
Ch 319 Drawing out Helda Vora I - speedyturtle2yrCommented
Did he not still have the potions that he bought before doing the trial? Cant he just use the potions in his inventory?
Marcus has a lot of potential to do something great, and that's all a family member can hope for. It will be a good day when he is able to fend for himself, and I'm sure mom wouldn't like the fact he will be ready to be on his own. "How long do you think it will take before Hailey and dad heal? Since dungeons will be arriving soon I figured it would be a good chance for all of us to get some levels. I'd be able to level you guys up faster, and I cant do that if they are still in bed." I don't think it will take them that much longer to finish healing. I shouldn't compare our healing times since I have lots of regeneration buffs to help. Having them ready for fighting will be nice, power leveling my family is something I never thought I'd be allowed to do. - speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 1 I’m Going Ahead First… Don’t Miss Me Too Much
- speedyturtle2yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue