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children. on here, its man children. pick your poison
i swear, if I have another person telling me that they dropped the fic due to ntr really need to get their brains checked. Read the chapter closely and understand the damn context. or do you just think that a simple fucking is enough to solve everyone's problems? I swear, some peolle are more insecure than the character I wrote with self esteem issues.
its alright I suppose. The grammar is pretty good, and the story flow nicely. Though, the characters feel a bit too one dimentional. Also, this might just be a personal thing, but there isnt enough descriptions for the environment. Sure its fanfic and relies on the reader to have prexisting knowledge of how things look, but a little bit more couldve helped. other than that, the fic is pretty solid.
yeah
sounds like a you problem
nurgal isnt a chaos god. fuck, it isn't the same name. I got it from the Mesopotamian god, not wh