Its really annoying when authors do this.

False hope

Cool chap

This is an AU anything can happen🙂

We all are😔

Im still learning, I tried to make things feel not so forced but I also felt the pacing of the story was a bit too fast. And with the old man, I wanted to add something new so it doesnt get boring. Also, I didnt nerf the character its just that he got rather ahead of himself and I made the beasts stronger than what they were in the anime.

Coo

Im dead, I didnt know it was you zelos

-Thousand image defense -Hand of god -Regeneration These were all mentioned in the first chapter.

Lol, you reviewed twice

Yeah, I had three versions before and he wont have a devil fruit unless I change my mind, his weapon will also be a sword. As for going solo or not, he will join the marines and maybe start his own crew later on in the future.

Ahhh before someone says something about me nerfing him, I DID NOT. I just made the beasts stronger than they were in the anime and manga, because to me, they just seemed a bit weak for the most impenetrable and inescapable prison in the world. So.... yeah

😁

I never planned for a harem

Yeth, Ill be continuing with the second route

This seems so...unrealistic, but its cool

Thats true, I didnt think about that. Thanks for the idea.

Lol seems everyone likes the second one. Ive been having trouble with that one because breaking out of impel down without waiting for the break out incident with luffy and blackbeard would be hard. I also have a couple of OCs but I dont think itd be wise to reveal them so early.

What about it is good? Felt kinda corny when I was writing that chapter, i’ll have to edit and revise it.

I feel it.