I like how the two sides each have what it needed for great cultivater shen boa has the will and wisdom and the other side has the raw talent and soul of a cultivater

I thought everyone in this world had access to the system why would he explain

nice

what happened to the other essence sge had from the city

poison origin skill please

I wanna see what none and skin do

goddess of life mercy and misery

are you coming back to this

hope you come back to this seems good

this will be fun I hope white interrupts the family dinner

I can just see in the realm of God's prison a high God or higher of chaos wakes up to bless kana

hope this stays the main relationship any other is a side one that Charlotte agrees to

you have enough chapters and a great story to turn this into a three book series with each around three hundred chapters and it will get your story out to more people

leading to that would be a good time for human/demihuman form

don't rush getting her a human form because become a kingdom build mostly story not bad but before chap ten its seems rush to me draw it out and have with it

hope this updates again its a great story

hope you come back to this

when does next update come

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seems interesting have fun with it it will keep you on it longer