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thomas_small2yrReplied to RebelKid10 is greater than 1, but 100 is greater than 10. if you see what I'm getting at
By this point, Finn had already circulated his dwindling energy throughout his body, focusing it all on fixing any injuries that would hinder his speed. Many cuts and bruises had to be ignored, including his mangled tail. He needed to conserve what little power he had left.- thomas_small2yrCommented
you could probably use a different phrase than this for every time he uses his healing ability
Finn's eyes lit up. It was working! The third degree burns on her skin were peeling off, revealing muscles, tendons, and skin tissues regrowing at a rate visible to the naked eye. - thomas_small2yrCommented
I'm honestly glad you didnt go with a system to tell him what he could do. the learning experience is always missed out on when they are told what they can do
Having thought of this before, Finn again wished he had been born with an instruction manual. He wondered what other tricks he could use his power to do... - thomas_small3yrCommented
that's not how this works, not how any of this works. but oh well
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