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So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess. This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it has The story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on. The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear. Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for. Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess. World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building. Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me

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Wanna be one

Thnx

just play

I found typos, and what's with Very...

Hmmm... first fix the typos

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Veru..... Seriously why ...

2 chapter is enough

Arigato

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