Darkstel

it's still too far-fetched, Hirata couldn't calm the girls down using the example of the same beach, this is complete author's nonsense, although they condemned in the canon, but they started direct confrontation with the swimming moment as an example, plus Suzune arranged all the people to fight with classmates, and she didn't care if it was noisy in all the lessons until May.

That's right, if you parasitize the System, you'll become a pitiful creature, just hard work.

The author's incompetence knows no bounds, considering that in the canon, no one touched these three idiots before the beach.

Overall, after three chapters, it's interesting, especially the Earth Guardian's catchy appearance compared to the canon, plus the development of relationships is faster (which is good from my point of view). Well, the most important thing is the declared harem (a surprisingly rare factor for fanfiction in this rather old world) at least I don't remember a good story with such a tag myself. Let's see if this time the exotic protagonist will win the attention of all the "planets''a solar system other than the "Moon" orbiting it?

The author relies a lot on artificial intelligence

Does SI seem to have a split personality, did he raise a flan himself to protect Naruko while running from contact with her? What a dumb jerk, on the other hand, this is not uncommon in "Chinese" stories.

5/10 can't do more than that.

I hope he doesn't become her dog, otherwise I'll throw this story in the trash.

well, in the game now we will see the route of Ronda in...2040?2050? Anyway, why not?

pokerface technically burned him down in front of these two.