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ise the one piece part a new story or is it just continuing this one. if it's a new story what is the title so I can search it
at this point I don't see this story ever getting finished, none of the previous stories this author has is complete and he can't seem to figure out what to do with the story. yes the prior readers want all the old content back, if you didn't like how you wrote it make a new story and start writing it with the changes you want made don't keep deleting everything
I think Luxray, Staraptor and the 3 sinnoh starters could work well with mega evolutions. Luxray I'd one I was always disappointed never got one considering how early you get it in the sinnoh games and can stay on the team nearly the whole way. also feel like toxicroak should get a mega cuz if I'm being honest there's not many strong/cool poison types and he work great for combating the steel type immunity with his fighting moves
I'm excited to see where this story goes. not gonna lie though if I'm in his situation I'm raising a litter of meowths or several litters for that matter. everyone else doesn't make use of payday because it ruins the economy but he doesn't have to worry about that if he uses the gold they produce for his shop, and if it feels too broken you could just add a restriction that meowths can only use payday once every 12hrs or once a day and have the value of payday gold be a certain amount of system gold so he can actually farm lots of stuff from the shop but it would still take time
grammar could use some work, and the chapters are a bit short but it has a good start