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This short story is great to read when bored. The chapters are short but he updated a lot of them. I really think that this book has a good chance I think it could become something. I think the storyline needs some work though, just a little though, it was repeating itself over and over. Also author I think you should download Grammarly, it helps with editing a lot. But all in all, it was a funny thing to read. I think you should make a volume 2 but try Grammarly and try to strive for at least 500 and slowly rise in word count, because like I said the chapters were really short. I know that this story is kind of childish, but it was really funny to read. That's why you should never judge a book by its cover.