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Oh snap... I HOPE THIS IS TYLER DOE!!!
I recommend extra butter on the lower area for extra training effectiveness
Everyone, this is not simping. this is adoring such a cute person. Even Chads know when to express emotions.
I know for sure this is Merry from Merryweatherey Comics. LEZZZGGOOOOOO!!!!
This... is too relatable. I've had many experiences of just drifting off to sleep, only to wake up feeling much more tired. Take care of yourselves, fellow weebs
Re-reading this again. I just love Sir Flexalot.
I knew this reference would come in eventually. xD
Now comes the question... is that Melody, or Melware? As a reader of this novel, without bias of me being a fan of the rantcafe podcast and their hosts, I still don't believe Melody is Recon's actual Kink. I made a poll in the official RantCafe Subreddit (which you should definitely go check out at https://***.reddit.com/r/RantCafe/) and the poll talks about if whether Dear John Recon (assuming he is indeed Demon Lord Havoc) really does have a kink now. As I mentioned in the official subreddit of the RantCafe, how come this particular Kink can speak vocally and be heard by everyone else? And why is SHE doing the one giving orders? Unless the Kink gets stronger through BDSM roleplay, it really doesn't make sense for a Kink to be this independent from its user. Anyways, I'd like to hear your thoughts in the replies. But if you would like a more in-depth discussion, then come join us in the official subreddit of the RantCafe over here at https://***.reddit.com/r/RantCafe/ and we will see yah over there space cowboys. Remember to stay weird fam! Shinpaku... BANG!!!
After reading this specific chapter for a few times now, I have to say. the pacing is done just right. Also, I'm now interested on how the process for naming a kink goes. The world building just keeps getting more and more rich with lore. but done in a great way that it doesn't become overwhelming or useless.
Okay. Overall, it's a good effort. I'll give you that. Albeit having quite a generic plot, it was still entertaining for me. I only have one problem, the writing. Thankfully, I was able to understand the gist of the dialogues or events happening, but small grammatical errors, happening over a frequent read, gave me a hard time to fully bring myself to the whole story. I'm sorry, it is a major pet peeve for me and as much as I would want to invest myself in the story, it's just those grammar errors (that could have been easily edited), annoy and put me off so much. Again, it's an okay story, just please focus on checking your work before publishing them. those little errors are alright once in a while, but if there's plenty of them (especially when I first read the prologue) it can stop a lot of readers from getting invested.
Here's a genuine problem I have and it involves Truck-chan: Assuming Truck-chan gets injured/physically harmed in any way, will it also carry over when she switches forms? For example, if her one of her wheels get a puncture, will that damage manifest itself into some form of cut or any human equivalent whenever Truck-chan turns into a human at night? I just find this thought intriguing, and I hope you can help me with an answer, Wonderful Slavic Adonis.
So.... After finally starting to read this, I'm so glad I found time to devote spending on reading this wonderful story. The writing so far is brilliant. Even a person who doesn't know you guys can still enjoy reading this without understanding the inside jokes and references to your both your individual and group careers. I understand the update issue, no major problem there. We all have other things to do in order to live. I like how detailed the characters' movements and scenes are. It helps in imagining what they are actually doing and how they would appear in one's head. Those fight scenes, for instance, nicely detailed but not too much that it becomes a technical paragraph. Anyways, looking forward to how the story moves along.