Story is a bit fast paced, which sometime make the story feel forced.Every now and then, some sentences missing some word or even worse, the sentence does not make any sense. I think this is due to the author is very immersed in writings the story that some of the plot that the author want to conveys stay in his/her mind and thinking he/she already wrote its. Romance felt unnatural, not sure why tho. Overalls, it is enjoyable if you have nothings to read otherwise wait until the author finished the story and so that reader can enjoy reading it. Suggestions that I want to make is to proof read it after finish writing a chapter.
The english kept getting worse and worse causing headaches. At first it was bearable bu as the chapter progressed, the english slowly become gibberish. SAD
is Dai old?
that oddly specific😂
some of the sentence doesn't make sense😑😑😑😑😑 so much word needed to post. need tk write more. omg why is it need many letter to post. cih!!!
dumbfounded* not dumped
The story is very interesting with unique mc. The author combine few unique anime that other author rarely used, making it more interesting. However, some part of the story feel rough and rushed, like mc relationship with mc's new parent. Sure the mc is not the real issei, but can the mc atleast show some logical interaction with his new parent. Not just go bang and the boom
Wait, the quest is to kill kjng kong so why did he kill everyone else? i dont get it
While the story, mc, wolrd and develoment is quite nice/good, the harem become chaotic(in my opinion) due to how many girls there are. sometime while reading the story, it is easy for me to not recognize some of his girl which actually kinda funny and irritating at the same time. So i hope the authorcan do something about it😂😂😂
similar to marcel, DC lore is quite deep.
I do get that the author want his/her novel to be in top 5p but please make separation between the story and the announcement otherwise it will ruin the reading experiences
The story is great, especially with it more focused on the slice of life aspect making it perfect for casual reading. Btw is there any chances of the story going multiverse(example going to simple world such as dragon ball world cuz Alice want to go there)? that will be interesting
Most of the story was rushed causing skme of the information to be terribly inaccurate. example of this is in chapter 8 where the author stated that kakashi's father is dead but in chapter 26, kakashi's father somehow alive. We dont mind you chnage the original plots as long as the story is consistent.