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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand1mth
    Posted

    Story is a bit fast paced, which sometime make the story feel forced.Every now and then, some sentences missing some word or even worse, the sentence does not make any sense. I think this is due to the author is very immersed in writings the story that some of the plot that the author want to conveys stay in his/her mind and thinking he/she already wrote its. Romance felt unnatural, not sure why tho. Overalls, it is enjoyable if you have nothings to read otherwise wait until the author finished the story and so that reader can enjoy reading it. Suggestions that I want to make is to proof read it after finish writing a chapter.

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand1mth
    Commented

    Here my stone again.

    Ch 120 Chapter 120: Flashback (1)
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand1mth
    Commented

    Damn This is amazing, pls more here my stone

    Ch 119 Chapter 119: Sneaky Princess...
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    One Piece: Luffy's big brother.
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand1mth
    Posted

    The story is good. hope you will continue this story soon馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑馃槑

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand1mth
    Replied to Izanmi

    What the original name?

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Posted

    The english kept getting worse and worse causing headaches. At first it was bearable bu as the chapter progressed, the english slowly become gibberish. SAD

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Commented

    is Dai old?

    It was none other than Maito Dai the precursor of the Eight Gates and Maito Gai father.
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Commented

    that oddly specific馃槀

    "Do not worry, Uncle give best massage. When Japan in China, Uncle beat all of them up. I fight ten people with massage in their dojo and walk out with bag of rice."
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Posted

    some of the sentence doesn't make sense馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕馃槕 so much word needed to post. need tk write more. omg why is it need many letter to post. cih!!!

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    WU DONG QIAN KUN (FAN-FIC)
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Commented

    dumbfounded* not dumped

    Like a bomb detonated in front of them, all the girls were petrified, even Tatsuki dumped hearing this secret.
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Posted

    The story is very interesting with unique mc. The author combine few unique anime that other author rarely used, making it more interesting. However, some part of the story feel rough and rushed, like mc relationship with mc's new parent. Sure the mc is not the real issei, but can the mc atleast show some logical interaction with his new parent. Not just go bang and the boom

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Commented

    Wait, the quest is to kill kjng kong so why did he kill everyone else? i dont get it

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Commented

    child?

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Posted

    While the story, mc, wolrd and develoment is quite nice/good, the harem become chaotic(in my opinion) due to how many girls there are. sometime while reading the story, it is easy for me to not recognize some of his girl which actually kinda funny and irritating at the same time. So i hope the authorcan do something about it馃槀馃槀馃槀

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand2mth
    Replied to Kutu

    Thanks for the translate

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand3mth
    Commented

    similar to marcel, DC lore is quite deep.

    [A/N: Folks, I need some help in deciding what should be the timeline for the DC arc. Because unlike Marvel, where I could take references from movies, I don't have anything like that for DC.
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand3mth
    Commented

    I do get that the author want his/her novel to be in top 5p but please make separation between the story and the announcement otherwise it will ruin the reading experiences

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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand3mth
    Posted

    The story is great, especially with it more focused on the slice of life aspect making it perfect for casual reading. Btw is there any chances of the story going multiverse(example going to simple world such as dragon ball world cuz Alice want to go there)? that will be interesting

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    The Devil of Yuragi-sou
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand3mth
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  • The_Hand
    The_Hand3mth
    Posted

    Most of the story was rushed causing skme of the information to be terribly inaccurate. example of this is in chapter 8 where the author stated that kakashi's father is dead but in chapter 26, kakashi's father somehow alive. We dont mind you chnage the original plots as long as the story is consistent.

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