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trash MC his thinking abandoning his home world, this the first time iread novel the MC trying to abandon his home world TRASH ....................................... 😈😈😈😇😇😇

i really want to smack the head of this MC that he become a special child this south the MC character, not naive/innocen ................... 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

better to remove R18 genre because it's only display and no use, and when i read that chapter ok in the beginning until the middle part but it's stop and abruptly ended just like that what a worse chapter..🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤

Good story but also disappointed because more enemy show up in front of the MC with his low lovel, and also about medicin herbs as it were useless even saint medicin are rare atlest it can rise 2 level or 1 without side effect below lvl 80, because its already rare medicine the same at divine medicine can rise 3 to 4 lvl below 89 to 80 and it can rise more below 70 and 1 to 2 lvl below 99 to 90 because it's already most rare and instincts divine medicine who can reach lvl 100 when consume it, not only the body but also the lvl that can rise lvl.✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️

Good story but there is a problem like when the truck hit the MC there is no reaction, like bang or something and when like * this, I don't know if they have pleasure each other or they are taking because no sound of pleasure when they have * because no reaction or sound that why that chapter is boring just like reading normal text not reading novel..

The MC is like a psychopath become even in serious talk he smile, small smile, big smile, and when it moan like a girl 🤔🤔🤔🤔... and also brainless..

i don't know the overall story, but im disappointed to MC in chapter 38 because he already threatened of his opponent and his family, but when the guy who's threatened him see his value in the game, he has all advantage even the guy same as him reincarnated, why not gamble he already died once and when the guy said he also reincarnate when the guy asked if he is also,,,,,, why say anay bullshet so that keep his secret and when the time comes he can take his revenge,,,,,,, and he said yes that why the guy changed to support him steed even take 30% share of his guild, even idiot know only profit his value like his first life, where his conviction from the first chapter..

The story is good but the grammar is poor, and also when it come to erotic scene make specific where you touch, become can you feel if you where touch to your hair that's why make specific where the MC touching because its already R18, novel not movie that can see... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

i think it's good if you remove the R18 Genre and replace it with mature Genre, because R18 genre is already know as erotic and in your novel is only in mature Genre, because your novel is not in adult genre category!!!!!!! 🤔🤔🤔

the MC had the four Women's in lce Emperor city, that can accommodate the Yang Family, why the MC take hes family to God Cult. ....