Bootquake

Grammar can be strange, especially tenses. Still prefer it to be correct tho, so good job ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Good.

Ha! Knew it.

Can't talk without lungs pushing air past your vocal cords. But he could have mouthed it instead.

Really enjoying the story so far!

I liked the presentation of the training the way it was done. Not something I've seen very often.

...bruh.

Very interesting start. I would also like to see this continued!

+1

+1