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The character development in this book is just so real! You can feel it happening right infront of you. Great story. Well written. Kept One hooked Up For months. The Frequency of updates Too was frequent and hence kept the curiosity at peek. Loved this book. I am sure the That the sequel is going to be even better.
Woah!! This story is back on track!! As fascinating as it has ever been! I love All these recent changes. And the story. Now i kinda feel bad for criticising it earlier. Looks like the author knows exactly what she is doing with the story. And boy those are some great plans!! All the best!!
I am a Law student thats currently working on Female empowerment. Yes i am familiar with all those horrendous Stories you are reffering to. But you see, Even in those stories all of those things dont happen with one single person. If they did, theres 99% chance that this person would end Up dead at the end of All this. But then again, this is fiction. thats tbe entire reason that i continued to read.
I Would like to believe that you wont. There are also other things about your story that i Must say becuase now that i have highlighted all the bads. Your writing style is simply too good. The way you have Developed the characters is Really Great. And all your characters are remarkable. One simply cannot forget them. The plot too was really good and kept me on my toes until it Kept going.
And look at that. Theres Childhood abuse, Kidnapping, Domestic abuse, Mafia, Blackmail, Threats, Plotting, Rape, Emotional torture, Emotional Manipulation ,Depression, Anxiety, Mental Issues, Psychopathic tendencies, and now Horror And Ghosts too. Honestly i think this is getting too messed up now. It feels like the Author wants to write everything that has been ever written in one story alone. I mean come on. No single person goes through ALL that in one single life. And even Pablo Escobar did not have so much variety in His life. And he was a real mafia leader.