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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    this doesn't seem like a simple escort mission....

    Ch 22 Chapter 22: A Mission?
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    so this marks the end of these zad training chapters, honestly he did a bit more than i thought he could, im surprised he could even use magic

    Ch 21 Chapter 21: A Chance To Grow Stronger [3]
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    another short chapter i see! i hope you get back to writing some long chapters sometime! these just aren't enough for me!

    Ch 19 Chapter 19: A Chance To Grow Stronger
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    echinda? that you?

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: The Troll Problem
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    this arthur character seems special somehow, but seeing as to how surprised he was to see ken's power, we can assume that he wont play a big part in the later chapters

    Ch 16 Chapter 16: And The Winner Is...
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    somehow i still think ken is holding back! but that may be just because we haven't seen him truly ever use every ounce of his power

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Ken vs Cra [Part 1]
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    there really isnt much to say in this chapter other than ken is stronger than expected, usually thought he seemed strong because he was surrounded by weak villagers!

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: An Unfair Matchup
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    oh god this cra the crusher aint gonna last long

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: Cra The Crusher!
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    i wonder what's so scary about that troll that Zad was so scared, also i didn't quite like the way zad kept saying ken's name at the end of the sentence, it makes it seem like he's trying to find a diffrent word for "boss" which is actually funny, overall great chapter and can't wait to see them fight this new enemy.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Grea Village
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    this young knight is pretty concerning, he might even hold ken back during a battle, unless some big changes come. also thanks for the early chapter!

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: A New Ally?
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
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    i liked the little reference to the first chapter. there really isnt much to say on this chapter other than, you're writing has gotten alot better!

    Ch 9 Chapter 9: The Aftermath
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Replied to CynicalDeath0

    maybe?

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: An Intense Showdown
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    Zelios!!!!!

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: An Intense Showdown
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    this chapter left on a exciting cliff-hanger, im wondering why that kid was barely able to talk out of fear, maybe he saw the king of wolves watching? also, Ken was carrying two swords!?!?

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: The Situation Just Got A Whole Lot Worse
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    very enjoyable chapter, also liked the tease in the last chapter about ken's lightning magic! cant wait for him to actually use it in combat once his mana capacity grows!

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: A Problematic Night
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Commented

    i very much liked the introduction of Zelios in this, truly a fascinating way to show his prowess and his reputation among the common folk, im very exited to see his role in the future!

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: The Knight In Shining Armour
    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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  • CynicalDeath0
    CynicalDeath03yr
    Posted

    the world seems vast and full of good materials, the characters seem well designed, I'd like a describe of the looks of the characters though, the mother seemed awfully willing to send her son into the unknown world? but overall i think the story has a good start, looking forward for the rest of your work bud!

    Kenzai
    Fantasy · SquidwardTentacles
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