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hala_halwani5mthCommentedCh 24 Handsome human being- hala_halwani1yrPosted
Why did the quality of the translation deteriorate soooo much suddenly? After 500 chapters or so you see clearly that the translator has changed and the English has become really bad. Even some of the characters’ names change. Di An and Di Yi become Zhai An and Zhai Yi for example. Some of the names keep on changing more than once! it kinda feel like machine translation with minimum editing. It started good but then… it’s torture to have to guess who the hell is doing what since most of the time the genders are reversed. And I‘m criticizing the language here nothing else. The story seems to be going somewhere frustrating too 🤦🏻♀️
- hala_halwani1yrCommentedCh 450 The Petersons
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To not too
"Mom, where is Asst Duyi taking my bag too?", Chen Lihua questioned. - hala_halwani1yrCommented
I like the denial concept hhhhh, funny and realistic
After pondering over the little matter for a while, she shakes her head in denial before going back to her room to continue her chat with her friends. - hala_halwani1yrCommented
Divine inspiration 🤔? 😂
Her phone vibrated, and she picked it up. She heard the white light say impatiently and hurriedly, "Where are you? Come back quickly!" - hala_halwani1yrCommented
Ya think?!!!!
Fang Ya sometimes thought that this was probably the reason why Tang Fu was so determined to divorce her. - hala_halwani1yrCommented
Some of her* nervousness
Fang Ya did not know what He Feng was thinking, but it also slightly eased some of his nervousness. - hala_halwani1yrCommented
A best friend with questionable moral values is not a keeper my dear, ditch her!
"Qiu, my poor Qiu, what were you thinking? You walked right into the living hell that the Fengs laid out for you, and now that you have a chance to escape, you won't even take it?" - hala_halwani1yrCommented
The author could use saliva instead of spit. I guess it’s lost in translation.
"I need to have a video meeting soon. I'll call you later tonight." Ji Shiting found an excuse to hang up the phone. He unbuttoned his shirt, probably because it was kind of stuffy in his office, swallowing some spit. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
Were greater then (not than)
She was Li Xiuying, a Li princess and while her twin sister and the Li family disapproved of him, they would have no choice but accept him into the family for Li Xiuying's sake. While it was true that he loved her, his ambition and pride were greater than. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
The workload lessened (no need for was)
As the company's condition drastically improved, Li Xiuying's workload was lessened. Since tonight was the celebration party of the company, Song Zexi was busy finding dresses for Li Xiuying to choose and wear later. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
She couldn’t hide the gloom (somber is an adjective, you need a noun here)
"You're late," Li Xiuying teased him but it couldn't hide the somber in her tone. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
If he betrayed you (if clause tenses)
"I hope you won't regret this, Ying. You wouldn't want to know how much it would hurt if he betrays you," Li Chuntao warned her. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
Making her feel nauseous
Their sweet words to each other made her stomach churn making her nausea again, but she couldn't vomit anything out. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
*He was sitting
"So… I died." Lily looked at the screen that was showing Grant when he discovered that Sienna died. "This guy is weird." She noted. Grant wasn't really crying. She was just sitting next to Sienna's dead body without saying a word. - hala_halwani2yrCommented
His mother*
"I won't tell him her mother actually murdered mine." - hala_halwani2yrCommented
I guess it’s sienna who’s talking here, not scarlet
"You are lying," Scarlette uttered when she heard the whole story from the man. "How could I avoid hurting you if you continue lying?"