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chuvi7mthPostedI really like this story, so I might be biased in writing the review. In my opinion, the grammar is quite good with the only drawback being a few no suite word choices and the characters are good with good interactions and make it seem like the characters have personality and are not boring in the interactions between the characters and for world building... well author uses a past world setting so... I can't judge that either, but the author is quite good at describing past world situations and doesn't seem to force the plot i rooting for u author-san keep ur good work
- chuvi7mthCommented
author did u plan to make mc primarly focus on yt? if so that such a wasting so much potential he can do.. and what about the plagiarize original future song that u bring earlier... are u forget it? cuz there no indication he will do it, like the propose by owner small studio he dont appear again
Ch 35 Chapter 35 - chuvi7mthCommented
it better if u just use 'in the previous time' than using word like time and space every time he recalled back his memory
In the previous time and space, there were few people that he could consider his true friends, and Jake was one of them. - chuvi10mthReplied to cagri
Lol....indeed
He had to face Death. He had to defeat it. He had to Conquer it at all costs. Only then, would he not be alone any longer. - chuvi11mthCommentedCh 65 ANNOUNCEMENT: Still here, just graduating
- chuvi11mthCommented
i mean you are in xianxia world what do u expect from a world with jungle laws LOL
Xenia seemed to have completely lost her trust in the sect. She had been lying in her cave for more than two and a half months but no one came to visit her except Quanzhi. No friends, No elders, No teacher nor even the sectmaster who used to praise her for being one of the outstanding outer-sect disciples! - chuvi11mthCommented
then it looks like the bead is more valuable than it looks
"Lastly, this pretty woman, who calls herself sectmaster, is among the top 50 in rankings." - chuvi11mthCommented
i guess it was "tower of god" reference
"To climb to a higher floor, one must defeat the floor's natural guardian." - chuvi1yrCommentedCh 52 The Man Who Guard's Life and Death First Part
- chuvi1yrCommentedCh 39 Change
- chuvi1yrCommented
author i hope that when bell has received falna he will not receive any nerf because you as you can see bell's visible strength now maxes out at around 4-5 adventurer level, that is without him over the limit like in artemis and athena arc too many good novels but because the characters are too op he gets dinerfed with reasons that are too far-fetched to fit the plot that's all my wish, I'm too tired with a lot of good novels but destroyed at the beginning because the author pushed the plot too much keep it up your good work i love this fanfic [img=recommend] (by google translate srry for the grammar)
Ch 47 Chapter 39.1: Side Stories. Artemis. Medea. Hestia - chuvi1yrCommented
Wow.. it amazed me that nobody complain bout this here o_o
Even as she was threatened to share the beds of many gods and goddesses. Even as she gritted through sharing a night with them. Even as she put herself as an incentive to solidify her position… that she might no longer be the play toy of another being… - chuvi1yrReplied to Asura_Vajra
exactly
Athena crossed her legs as she sat on a nearby couch in her room. Resting her head on her palm which she positioned on top of her leg. - chuvi1yrReplied to Mortem_OuroborosCh 40 Chapter 33: Beast
- chuvi1yrReplied to PrimordialDemonCh 3 Chapter 2: Vritra=Asura Shresta
- chuvi1yrReplied to RouedkarossCh 22 Chapter 20: Daybreak Hunt. Welf
- chuvi1yrCommentedCh 12 Chapter 12