I really like this story, so I might be biased in writing the review. In my opinion, the grammar is quite good with the only drawback being a few no suite word choices and the characters are good with good interactions and make it seem like the characters have personality and are not boring in the interactions between the characters and for world building... well author uses a past world setting so... I can't judge that either, but the author is quite good at describing past world situations and doesn't seem to force the plot i rooting for u author-san keep ur good work
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