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Hi. nice book here, i really like your writing. the plot isn't bad, it's better than the CN novels out there which are very boring because of the slow factor, naive (in terms of killing), likes face slaps and hiding power. man... this is much better. hope it doesn't fall
Alright honest judgment here, I really liked the start. How the MC grows slowly and the plot is so different from other FFs. But it was destroyed halfway with the destruction of the Holy Family with our MC strength being at bronze rank 2... I mean bruh, I know you said our MC has true cultivation, but what is that OP power??? Even MC's story of being a colonizer is fine, but not to mess up the entire Glory of MC's body cradle. Well... Just like that, I stopped reading at CH 30.
Good choice born outside of the Fire Nation. You know, Konoha is very dark with all kinds of monsters in it.
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What's with this uwu scene? I'm quite sad remembering having to leave them later[img=tamparan muka]
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Kesan Saki kayak ganggu banget njir. Cwe model gini suka cemburu, marah gak jelas. terus putus~ Menghedeh...