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chuunibyo
so.... he's basically venom now
uhhhh....he knows jutsu isn't exactly elemental manipiulation....right?
I have read a lotta fanfics whose MC has their power based if fuinjutsu haven't really read one where uzushio is still active. nevertheless, despite the fact that this is a new author, it seems to have a lotta potential and there's a setup for a big novel here, given the fact that we're just supposedly shortly after the first Shinobi war. I hope the author takes his time to write what he wants what he enjoys and just uses criticism as just that, criticism. This has a lot of potential, and I would hate to see it join the pile of dropped novels.
Access*no need for "The"
connections*
myths*
Isn't this just "Third person"?
took*
probably*
hope you know mangekyo's can awaken normally.what a family member's eyes are needed for is the 'eternal' mangekyo sharingan
kukuku!