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Just wondering if the other 2 chapters where going to be released?

Bdsm is not my thing and neither is real world romance but this book was very good and kept my attention the entire time. I highly recommend!

Jumping 20 to 30 feet is cool and all but realistically he would have never saw the gloves that were that high. The average story in a building is about 14 feet so 28 would be on the top of the second story. So he would be jumping to reach the third floor of a building to get a pair of gloves

The Eiffel Tower is only 330 meters high. A 1000 meter wall would be infeasible and would fall over with a good storm. That’s why sky scrapers sway.

This would be a great story if it was in order and there wasn’t repeat chapters. I wouldn’t waiste your coin because you might get mad when you figure out you paid for a new chapter and it’s on you already read. An this isn’t a one time time it’s a rear thing.

I feel the story would flow better if you used names instead Of discribing them by looks. It’s a hard to keep up when I have to stop and think who’s red head and who’s Japanese?

This is a bit confusing. You reffernce a sentence up that lilly saw Dawn on His arm but not Then state after that that she saw him and that her plan worked. She had seen him already.