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šš¾šš¾šš¾šš¾ say that again! Yāall starving but still got time to worry about somebody else business. You clearly got time so look for food. š
How long are they going to keep what they know a secret? Xin has clearly met some soldiers and people from the capital. Now seems like the time to tell her so she can evaluate peopleās character correctly.
What the hell is wrong with Liang Jiyang? Sheās mean & vicious. Isnāt most female leadās likeable? She beef with everybody she meets. š¤£
How many ways has he ALREADY said he didnāt want you? š¤£ at this point you are being delusional & the people around you are making it worst.
I hope she saw his reaction to the carriage burning. I wish she could sneak in to see him but at the same time I donāt know whatās going on with the novel Nan Hua and how she came to the conclusion that they are making the same choices. So I donāt want her to slip up and get caught in something sheās not prepared for.
What I need is for Nan Hua to see that LQX does not want that girl. š She still has in her head that they will be together and I want her to see itās different from the novel. Also how could Kuang Shen want LQX to give that girl a chance? How would she be happy when he doesnā t feel that way about her? Thatā s stupid and could lead to a lot of unhappy people. Yes the novel female lead will be called that girl š¤£ because I donā t like her forcing LQX to be familiar with her.
Why do I feel like this person that approached her is from the other kingdom? Like she took some poison. I donāt think it is needed. I understand enough from her now. When you described the fall of the Qu family the perspective from her told me what I needed to know about her mindset. So just focus on when they cross paths with Nan Hua and other main characters. Thank you author great story!!
*Goes back to admire the cover*
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I think if it is ALOT Of details with the character stories then you can do a separate book. if its just 5 chapters per couple I would suggest side story chapters after the epilogue.