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StaticMatter

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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter2mth
    Replied to Hunter101Bomber

    agreed chapter's have been shorter lately and have been feeling like they end before they can properly rap up the scene they are trying to portray.

    Ch 366 Are You Done?
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    Interstellar Age
    Sci-fi · Zentmeister
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter6mth
    Posted

    Well like others I wanted to like this story but it was just so hollow. Things just happen and there is no development of anykind. Honestly this feels more like a draft then a propper story.

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    Reincarnated as a Son of the Sword Saint and the Sage
    Fantasy · Jrmb_Eleven
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter11mth
    Posted

    So I read up to the last free chapter and I have to say the story is not bad but it not great either. Also be aware there are a lot of 4th wall brakes. The last thing I would like to add is if you are expecting a serious story were the MC strives to gain as much power as possible to overcome what will happen in the future then move on to another story. No one in this story feels like they are taking things seriously and a comedy tag really should be added to this story.

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    I Will Kill The Author
    Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    so just a bit confused here bullets fired in the air at a target moving away from the person who fired them would not come back down at there location in most cases. They would ark and hit a area further down range. The only two ways I could see them coming back down on a person would be if they were shooting straight up or they were shot at a extreme angle and high winds forced them back towards the shooter. Then again this could just be magic and I am over thinking things

    The bullets that had been fired in mass had reached a certain height now began falling back down to earth rapidly, heading straight for the soldiers who had fired them.
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    Reborn In Modern family as Iron Man!
    TV · Karate_master_b
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 971 Japanese Military Reforms
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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 961 Napalm in the Morning
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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    TB can be cured. Also it's highly infectious so one would think in a prison they would want that taken care of.

    Tuberculosis
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    man that is a lite sentence for murder

    {In accordance to the law, You will be sent to jail for 3 year}
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    Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel
    Fantasy · chaotic_1
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 938 International Diplomacy Part III
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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    suspicious but here you go

    Ch 43 Notification
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    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 402 Chapter 402: King of the World
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 401 Chapter 401: Just a Little Gray
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 401 Chapter 401: Just a Little Gray
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 368 Chapter 368: New Face
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    Villain Retirement
    Urban · Romeru
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    I think you got that backwards. You are the one that won't survive

    [... you know what to do. *holds gun to the temple of your head* I better get what I want... or you may not survive very much longer.]
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    I'm Batman (HP Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • StaticMatter
    StaticMatter1yr
    Commented

    promis to not drop this story and you will get the stones (pulls out two pistols)

    ["gimme power stones!" The author said menacingly as he takes a pistol from his pocket and aims it directly at your forehead.]
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    I'm Batman (HP Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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