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thank you :) I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work .

yes it a rough draft . I still need to go back in and clench it up and edit it . when I get the time I'm going to go back in . I will update chapter by chapter . I haven't even read it through yet so I know there is so much that needs to be fixed and will have to add on to parts .

this is sad. I hope he ends up loving her and some how some way finds a way to save her .

First chapter and I'm already reeled in. great writing so far author.

@AyaNasha this chapter is for you . thank you so much for reading my story. I will be adding more to it . for a whe I gave up on it but your comment made me want to start working on it again . I appreciate you taking the time to read it :)

hmmm, so maybe there is more to the story then we thought ;) who did that to Payton? Do you think she knows about it ? If so why is she hiding it ? :)

chapter 1 was me really trying to exsplain alot . there are many chapters to come that I really like but chapter one i feel i really need to come back and work on later. i hope this does not discourage you all from reading on . i have new chapters to add but I'm wanting to get some reads and reviews on what i have written so far before i add anymore chapters .

thank you my life got really busy but I am hoping to get back on soon and work on it. I know it's a mess right now and needs alot of work