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Day_OPM2yrReplied to FNU_LNU- Day_OPM2yrCommented
Author san what does the mc even look like? Like i saw you say he was handsome but lIke what Does his face and height look liKe?
In his room, Vincent wore a black hoodie over his white T-shirt, and it matched his light black pants and black running shoes with white outlines reaching the soles. Hanging a backpack on his shoulders and taking out an inquisitive weapon from a jeweled box, he walked out of his room and directly went to the orphanage entrance. - Day_OPM2yrCommented
Bro this is the dumBest thing ive seen in a while there is literally nothing you have written so far to warrant this interaction between them. Her As the useless daughter having the abilty to lwt anyone join A guild anywhere was already sus but this is to far
The consequences of that gesture came before Yoichi's eyes in the form of sharp images. He was fully aware that he would become an outlaw, but the Princess's freedom had no price. - Day_OPM2yrCommentedCh 26 Legend
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Bro i doNt even know what enatsu looks like tbh all i remember him is having a coat. so now im picturing him as the typical fatty best friend of the mc
"No, I mean it. We've known each other recently, that's true. However, you are the first person who truly believed in my potential, Yoichi", Enatsu admitted, looking at the ground before him. "From the first moment you saw me wandering in the rain, you were kind and friendly towards me. You hosted me under your roof without knowing me, and I thanked you with unpleasant words. I'm very sorry, for real." - Day_OPM2yrCommented
In the hood i be askin my self this same question..
-"Why are the cops not here yet?" - Day_OPM2yrCommented
Im not gone lie i read until chapter 60 but i cant take it anymore. Your fight scenes are incredibly weak and the story is as basic as it gets i tried to Hold on but this is honestly a chore to read. all it is is training on repeat with no actual reward for the reader in Getting to see him use his powerrs. i wont leave a bad review because i respect you for being able to write consistently and follow your dreams but all in all up until chapter 60 tour book was 1 dimensional and boring
Ch 144 Blake vs The Crowned Prince - Day_OPM2yrCommented
Im going to throw up... This cheesy cliche is killing me
This paragraph has been deleted. - Day_OPM3yrReplied to Day_OPMCh 295 Chapter 292: G.S.T, Combined
- Day_OPM3yrCommentedCh 169 Chapter 169 A stunned Zhang Dingxiang
- Day_OPM3yrReplied to Yog_Sothoth0
was pretty foolish especially since a lower tank in the top 10 knew about him, other guilds definitely knew as well. the fact that they didn't even teach out has to mean that 5hey have the power to ignore his beast or at the very least not have the need to throw the olive branch in the first place
Ch 164 Chapter 164 The Pale Moon guild's offer - Day_OPM3yrCommentedCh 162 Chapter 162 Pale Moon merchant guild
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hey everyone its LS here
Lu Ze dodged every attack of the tentacles but still couldn't get close, not even a little. The tentacles were too agile. They could move like a snake and could make L, S and M shapes. - Day_OPM3yrReplied to ZeusTheOlympianCh 150 Chapter 150 The scheme behind the Vermilion realm