oscar_moreno

don't they mean Victor?

Natalie Rushman, it's her go to cover name

This is your story take however long, you need to make it feel right to you. I think the pace you have now is great. The background and pacing work very well together.

I feel each chapter pacing is great. It gives you a feel of time running out, that they need to make it quick because they will be attacked or restricted soon.

Emma Frost

+1

+1

Oscar?

1 definitely